Last Word *55Fiction*
When you held my hand,
I wanted to believe in those sparkling eyes but as you broke into silences.
I knew there was nothing left.
but still I wanted to believe in those eyes because they revealed the truth you held beneath you ;the love which was impossible to hide behind those "Forget me" .
⇨ Signing Off ♥Prathi♥
I wanted to believe in those sparkling eyes but as you broke into silences.
I knew there was nothing left.
but still I wanted to believe in those eyes because they revealed the truth you held beneath you ;the love which was impossible to hide behind those "Forget me" .
PS My first attempt to write a 55fiction. *55fiction is a short story delivered in 55 words.*
⇨ Signing Off ♥Prathi♥
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Well written.
lovely 55!
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तू चाहती थी कि
मैं लिखूं तुझ पर कुछ
पर पाता हूं खुद को असमर्थ
कि तुम
जो खुद एक किताब हो
उसके पन्ने पलटते पलटते
खुद मैं खो जाता हूं
पर हाँ, इतना लिखना काफी है
कि मेरी ज़िन्दगी की किताब के
मुखपृष्ठ पर छपी तेरी आँखें
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