Missing You #55Fiction-1

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I looked out ,the Window Wishing to see you soon and tell you .
I feel rainbow every time you kiss me .
Your Heartbeat make me Dance.
The real beauty lies in your smile, you bring back the lost hope,freshness of life.
but where are you ?? Monsoon is here ! It was suppose to Rain .



PS Well this is my second attempt for 55Fiction, what you think ? Its simply all about a girl wishing for  Rain and describing the beauty when it showers on her . 

⇨Signing Off ♥Prathi♥


Comments

Phewww said…
i thot she was missin somethin else.. :)

it was rain...huh... :D
June 18, 2011 at 12:59 AM
Gowthami Nandigala said…
It's cool yashika(like this name)..

keep writing more 55Fs :)
June 18, 2011 at 2:34 AM
prathima gangadhar said…
@anoop lol well tat was my intention :)
June 18, 2011 at 9:33 AM
prathima gangadhar said…
@gowthami me too thank you :)
June 18, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Prudhvi said…
rainbow don't come without a rain....:D
and yu know wat rain meanz....:-)

nd if rainbow comez every time it rainz...yu don't wait for it anymore...:D

luvd the way yu expressed....:-)
June 18, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Ankit said…
It was nice,
Specially the pic !!
it's awesum !!!

Beautifully portrayed !!

Carry on !!

Happy Blogging !!
June 18, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Arpit said…
Nicely done. :)
Emotions captured are really great. :)
June 20, 2011 at 11:28 AM
prathima gangadhar said…
£arthie thanks ra :)

Ankit thank you and picture the credit goes to the photographer :)

Arpit Rastogi thanks a ton :)
June 20, 2011 at 2:19 PM
Scribblers Inc said…
Good writing Prathi!
Little grammar issues here and there; polish them out and you are good to go! :)

wishes
Scribblers Inc.
June 21, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Tanvi said…
Well written!

(Previous Post) So true! :) Spellings really doesn't matter.

♥ from © tanvii.com
June 22, 2011 at 3:43 AM
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